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Post by Darkzard666 on Jul 12, 2004 23:39:46 GMT
Tell me what you think, and tell me if you think I'm ripping bands off (I tend to do that w/out realising) I don't really have titles, I just kinda number them, these are my favourite ones that are most recent.
Promised once security, Full bodied deformity, Morphing into who I want, Failing to kill what I’m not
Trapped inside, A soul will hide, Losing pride, I fall into the mists, Of your long lost heart, Bleeding freedom, One another, Something Darker, We discover.
Hopping to reality, A Christian Morality, One rule to doubt, What life’s about, A broken dream, My lonely scream, It longs to stay, Very soon I’ll fade, away
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So I think and think away, As I think I drift away, As I slip into this sleep, As my eyes begin to weep, Images painted in my head, Only seen while lain in bed
All these thoughts they free my brain, Sometimes I can't escape my pain, But the pictures help me forget, The reasons why I feel upset
As I rise, it all comes back, Nothings changed, and that’s a fact
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I’ll just lie here, Wide awake, Subdued by thoughts of you, In this hot and burning sun, I bake and think, that you’re the one, Too long I have kept this in, And now I’m telling you, These feelings hiding in my skin, Are felt for only you.
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Post by Munky on Jul 13, 2004 8:30:39 GMT
I love your poems sammi, i think there great ;D
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Post by Darkzard666 on Jul 14, 2004 0:08:07 GMT
Awww bless that's so sweet of you! thanks loads! haha *ten foot smile on my face right now*
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Post by Munky on Jul 14, 2004 10:25:17 GMT
Awww bless that's so sweet of you! thanks loads! haha *ten foot smile on my face right now* hehe ;D, they are great though
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